Thursday, October 30, 2008

A crisp snowfall

while you play a cello suite,
the moon must be crying


David said...

I like this!

especially the last line

'snow falls
while you play the cello
the moon must be crying'


WorkingWords100 said...


Beatrice V said...

Thank you, David and WW100

Nora said...

Lovely, Beatrice. Thank you.

Möme said...

This is really beautiful - not just the ideas of the poem, but even the individual words and how you've put them together.