Friday, October 10, 2008

after the storm
twitching in the gutter:
skeletal umbrella

3 comments:

Nora said...

What a vivid image, John! What a tragic end!

David said...

disturbing! It's that word 'twitching' that does it for me. And what 'storm' are you referring to? There is something ominous here.

Brilliant!!

kouji | haiku said...

cool. :O