Monday, September 8, 2008

time
the rusty clock
is ticking in the trees


(inspired by David's recent haiku and Sorley MacLean's poem Hallaig)

8 comments:

Nora said...

I like it! A great image.

David said...

glad mine helped yours. And yours reminded me of this one

"today the wind is in the trees"

John McDonald said...

very good
john

John McDonald said...

very good
john

John McDonald said...

very good
john

Poet in Residence said...

x3!
I guess you mean 'very, very, very good' John!

John McDonald said...

sorry Gwilym
john

Poet in Residence said...

certainly no need to apologise John, your Freudian(?) slip is most welcome here!