bronzed leaves slowly corroding in soft autumn light
Photo by warren49 (me)
I really like this! But I want to be tough, and say, why not... bronzed leaves slowly corrodesoft autumn lightAnd because I like that word 'corrode' or even the original 'corroding' I wonder if you can give more space to the text so it is separate from the other info text.Sorry to be a tartar, but I feel your work deserves separation from the mundane blog text of date time etc... that interferes, and runs into, your marvellous poetry..
corroding... very nice. :)
alan i agree 'corrode' is a stonger word than 'corroding', the suffix 'ing' has almost always a deadening effect.Thanks
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