Sunday, September 14, 2008

Bronzed Tree










bronzed leaves slowly corroding in soft autumn light

Photo by warren49 (me)

www.conjuringsunlight.blogspot.com

4 comments:

Nora said...

Oooh, lovely!

Alan Summers said...

I really like this! But I want to be tough, and say, why not...


bronzed leaves slowly corrode
soft autumn light


And because I like that word 'corrode' or even the original 'corroding' I wonder if you can give more space to the text so it is separate from the other info text.

Sorry to be a tartar, but I feel your work deserves separation from the mundane blog text of date time etc... that interferes, and runs into, your marvellous poetry.

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kouji said...

corroding... very nice. :)

David said...

alan i agree 'corrode' is a stonger word than 'corroding', the suffix 'ing' has almost always a deadening effect.

Thanks