Tuesday, September 2, 2008

rain clouds gone -
doves' wings
shaking the light

2 comments:

Poet-in-Residence said...

your 'crows' was very strong - so can't see this one without thinking of that one! illuminating though,
gwilym

John McDonald said...

sorry about the change this is how it originally read and then I tinkered with it and now it's back to how it reads in Zenspeug
john