A very strong haiku, very effective. The discordant switch from romantic nature to melancholic human relationships works well.
Thank you, David. The idea is that 'my friends' can refer to almost anything in the poem or outside it. ;)
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A very strong haiku, very effective. The discordant switch from romantic nature to melancholic human relationships works well.
Thank you, David. The idea is that 'my friends' can refer to almost anything in the poem or outside it. ;)
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