What a lovely element of surprise here, John
Fun and surprising :)
i like this one a lot, especially the symmetry of 'maple leaves' and 'cherry trees', the gentle rhyme of 'leaves' with 'trees' Also the strong, sumptuous consonants of 'ma' and 'ch'very neat
lovely. :) great surprise indeed.
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What a lovely element of surprise here, John
Fun and surprising :)
i like this one a lot, especially the symmetry of 'maple leaves' and 'cherry trees', the gentle rhyme of 'leaves' with 'trees' Also the strong, sumptuous consonants of 'ma' and 'ch'
very neat
lovely. :) great surprise indeed.
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