Gorgeous
Thank you :)
Good alliteration and assonance. I try to work those into my own haiku. Toothsome words paint lovely imagery.
Thanks Nora :)
This works well "wandering caterpillar". You create a rhythm with these 3 and four syllable words. I like the aimless association with "wandering".The personification of "admires" is a light, amusing touch.And then you round off the whole thing with "chrysanthemums" brings the whole haiku to a fitting end like a phonetic firework display.Great fun.
Thanks for your very generous comments, david. :D
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Gorgeous
Thank you :)
Good alliteration and assonance. I try to work those into my own haiku. Toothsome words paint lovely imagery.
Thanks Nora :)
This works well "wandering caterpillar". You create a rhythm with these 3 and four syllable words. I like the aimless association with "wandering".
The personification of "admires" is a light, amusing touch.
And then you round off the whole thing with "chrysanthemums" brings the whole haiku to a fitting end like a phonetic firework display.
Great fun.
Thanks for your very generous comments, david. :D
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