tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7798578235216605531.post6028638006143119198..comments2023-07-25T01:00:42.700-07:00Comments on Autumn Haiku 2008: Stevehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16394056957171485464noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7798578235216605531.post-64582813763129243552008-09-22T05:44:00.000-07:002008-09-22T05:44:00.000-07:00Thanks for your very generous comments, david. :DThanks for your very generous comments, david. :DAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03223324219391300089noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7798578235216605531.post-22164500190862920032008-09-02T10:26:00.000-07:002008-09-02T10:26:00.000-07:00This works well "wandering caterpillar". You creat...This works well "wandering caterpillar". You create a rhythm with these 3 and four syllable words. I like the aimless association with "wandering".<BR/><BR/>The personification of "admires" is a light, amusing touch.<BR/><BR/>And then you round off the whole thing with "chrysanthemums" brings the whole haiku to a fitting end like a phonetic firework display.<BR/><BR/>Great fun.Davidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14343643387576533616noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7798578235216605531.post-83895766142287585592008-08-31T15:25:00.000-07:002008-08-31T15:25:00.000-07:00Thanks Nora :)Thanks Nora :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03223324219391300089noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7798578235216605531.post-14217160367902707832008-08-31T09:26:00.000-07:002008-08-31T09:26:00.000-07:00Good alliteration and assonance. I try to work tho...Good alliteration and assonance. I try to work those into my own haiku. Toothsome words paint lovely imagery.norahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02228725106863747984noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7798578235216605531.post-53147882910295780182008-08-31T04:01:00.000-07:002008-08-31T04:01:00.000-07:00Thank you :)Thank you :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03223324219391300089noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7798578235216605531.post-82594032727159700242008-08-31T00:24:00.000-07:002008-08-31T00:24:00.000-07:00GorgeousGorgeousBeatrice Vhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09492224274542764248noreply@blogger.com