Saturday, August 30, 2008

drift

green to shades of red
they drift down, we rake, they pile
sweet smell of autumn

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haiku poem

10 comments:

goooooood girl said...

So good......

Wordcrafter said...

lovely start to the autumn

kouji said...

thanks, wordcrafter.

kouji said...

thanks, goooooood girl.

Winter Moth said...

Nice one Kouji :)

Nora said...

sweet smell of autumn, indeed! Well done, Kouji!

kouji said...

thanks, winter moth.

kouji said...

thanks, nora.

Poet-in-Residence said...

reminds me of my compost heap - it smells lipsmacking sweet today - some apple windfalls mouldering in there along with the leaves...

nice one kouji,
gwilym

kouji said...

thanks, gwilym. :) will have to get around to setting up a compost heap of my own one of these days.