Sunday, November 2, 2008

breeze

auburn leaf falls
picked up by the breeze
it goes on and on


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nature haiku

4 comments:

John McDonald said...

enjoyed this
john

Beatrice V said...

So vivid that "drifting in the iwnd" feeling and dreams. Beautiful.

Möme said...

Nice one, Kouji!

David said...

this works well!

but i wonder

leaves [leaf] fall[s]
picked up by the breeze
again and again

D